Once, a cat and a mouse were living in the same house and
they were very good friends. They were playing together all the time and always
go out for walking together.
As winter was approaching, they decided to stock some food
in their house.so they went to the market and bought the food. Fearing that
other cats or mice might steal their food, and also to stock the food for long
time, so they hid it in the first floor of their house in a very small room.
One day, the cat and the mouse were sitting beside the
fireplace watching a football game and the weather was outside so bad and it
started to snow. After like two hours, the door was knocked, so the cat got so
surprised because no one can leave his house in that bad weather and she went
to open the door and she saw that their friends came to stay in their house for
couple days because their car broke down near the house and they need to wait until
the storm ends so that they can repair their car.
The cat and the mouse were so happy to have their friends in
their house and they decided to prepare the dinner for them. They went to the
kitchen to prepare the food, but they did not find enough food in the
refrigerator to feed eight members. So the mouse said to the cat, “what we
should do now?” the cat said, “we do not have any other choice, we have to come
out with some food from the first floor, I think it is time for that now.”
The cat went to the first floor in their house and brought
the food and the mouse prepared the dinner for the guests and had very great
night that day.
After ten days, the storm was getting much worse and the
whole ground covered with the snow. It was very severe storm. The guests were not able to leave and reach
their car. The cat and the mouse had no food left in their house. And after
they discussed this problem for a day, the mouse decided to go out to get some
food. The cat said,” you can’t go out in this bad weather. “ The mouse answered, “I have to go we can’t
stay without food for long time.”
The mouse struggled a lot to get out of the house because
there was too much snow, but after walking hours and hours, he got so tired and
did not find any market to buy some food. Finally the mouse found an old man in
the street he was also trying to find food for his family, so the mouse did not
know that and he decided to ask the man if he can give him some food, and when
he asked the man about the food the man hit him very strongly and left him in
the ground not moving.
After half of the day passed, the cat went out to find the
mouse because she was so worried about him. Then she found the mouse in the
street deaf and blind because of the hitting. She took him to the house and
takes care of him until both of them died.
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Author’s Note:
The original story is a story from the Chinese fairy tales
units and it is called “Why Dog and Cat are Enemies” It talks about a cat and a
dog they were friends and decided to help their owners to get back the luck
ring after they sold it, but the cat was so selfish and gets the reward to
herself and kept the dog without anything and from that day the cat and dog are
enemies. In my story, as everybody knows the mouse and cat can never be
friends, so in my story I made these two creatures are an amazing
friends and they overcame all the challenges in their life.
Bibliography: Story source: The Chinese Fairy Book, ed. byR. Wilhelm and translated by Frederick H. Martens (1921).
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ReplyDeleteWow, I think that was a great story. I enjoyed this story. It was very nice and even though the ending ended with their death, it was bittersweet. It was very cute as well. At least they were together till the end, despite their natural biological tendency as prey and predator. Great job at writing. I think you are a great writer!
ReplyDeletePlease read my comments that came to mind while I was reading your story. You should be able to piece together which part of the story I was on when I made the comment!
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A cat and a mouse living together? This should be interesting since they normally don’t get along.
That’s great that their friends came to visit. I was also wondering if they were going to serve them with the food they had stocked up on… Looks like they will be.
What a brave mouse to go out and brave that weather to get the food!
Well, that’s very unfortunate that the mouse got beat up for asking for some food. Luckily, the cat found him and they were able to be with one another for the remainder of their lives.
I wonder if they ever got the food they needed? Good story!